(Choose an important moment in the story for one of the characters and write a diary entry for that character.)

Sheila`s Diary
The scene in the the Inspector told what happened to Eva Smith. Sheila recognized her on the picture which Inspector Goole showed Sheila.
Dear diary
Today I heard something horrible. Inspector Goole was in our house and showed me a picture of a women. This women comitted suicide.
I rember her. I saw her in my favourite clothes boutique. She worked there.
On this day I tried a dress but it didn`t fit on me. A moment later Eva held the dress on her body and the dress fit. Eva smiled with eyecontact to me. I was so angry and hurt in my pride. I was jealous.
Out of this reason, I complained about her and she lost her job.
Now I feel me so bad. It can be the reason why she commited suicied. Only from my zest and pride.
I have a lot to learn out of my mistake and improve myself.

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